The beginning to a fight can be the most challenging to make, just like the beginning of a movie. The challenge for most is who should start the fight. That might sound crazy, but it is important. If someone has more at stake than the other, then they should be the starter. The beginning is my favorite part of a fight. The reason being that I love the buildup and the tension but I also enjoy how it’s all going to start.
Many fight scenes simply start with none of what I just mentioned.In The Protector, both the main character and the bodybuilder just kind of charge at one another; nothing to grasp there.Even though a lot of the fights in the movie are exciting, there was no payoff at the end.Not only did you not know Tony Jaa’s character, but also the filmmakers didn’t even try to make you want the fight, they just gave it to you.When a director just hands over a fight, you know they didn’t give it their all.
Empire Strikes Back is a great example of a film that makes you want the climactic fight to happen.Created with the style of Kurosawa, Lucas and his team created the stall, or slow walk for the duel.The story of the fight is that Luke confronts Vader in order to save the ones he cares about.Through the fight scene, though, the characters have to explain this.
The entire movie is built around facing your fears by confronting the dark side.Luke Skywalker, sworn to walk the path of peace (Jedi), believes he is not afraid of the threat that is Darth Vader.When the two finally collide, Luke Skywalker is the one who starts the battle.This is significant for one reason: never do Jedi start a conflict.Later in the battle, Luke shows once again that he is not ready.Not only does he start to fear Vader, but also he simply cannot overcome him.Also, in the middle of the fight, Luke begins to realize what he is becoming.For two movies, Luke was slowly turning to the dark side with displays of recklessness (as shown in A New Hope, and pointed out by Yoda earlier in Empire), selfishness (facing Vader alone), and fear (of Vader).What happens internally with Luke adds a new layer to this unforgettable fight scene, and makes “I am your father” a truly potent climax.
Fight scene openings are hard to accomplish.If the audience doesn’t feel the excitement at the opening, then the fight scene is doomed to mediocrity (or worse).Check out below for fight scenes with the best openings.Enjoy!
Besides the protagonist, antagonist, and conflict, setting and genre are also important building blocks of a story.
Setting is important because a writer has to decide where their story takes place. One way to establish a setting is through world-building. It’s how a writer sets up the world where the story takes place. Most of the time, world-building is discussed in regards to the genres of fantasy and science fiction, because a lot of these stories exist in fictional universes. Instead of setting stories like the The Hobbit, or The Lord of the Rings in England or Europe, J.R.R. Tolkien created fictional lands known as Middle-earth. Through extensive imagery and detailed maps, Tolkien is able to transport readers out of our world, and into his.
By adding in details about the world, the story becomes more believable because the setting becomes more real to the audience.
While Middle-earth may be a grand example, world-building doesn’t have to be that difficult. Even if you set a story in your hometown, your audience will need to learn details about the time and places where the characters are. It’s also okay to not know everywhere the characters will go before you start writing. As you write, things will change with the story. It’s okay to discover new settings as the story grows.
Depending on the type of story you are telling, you may have different kinds of settings. A lot of times a meeting place signals the start of a new adventure, like The Prancing Pony in The Lord of the Rings, or the Mos Eisley Cantina in Star Wars. Not just in epic stories are eateries so important. Look at Café Nervosa in Frasier, Central Perk in Friends, or the bar in Cheers.
Other times, a workplace serves an important part of the story, like Dunder Mifflin’s Scranton branch in The Office, Pawnee City Hall in Parks and Recreation, or the WJM TV station on The Mary Tyler Moore Show. In sitcoms, these meeting places often are where lots of different stories begin.
The environment can also play an important part of the story. Countless holiday films deal with heavy snow causing problems, and in disaster movies the world itself seems to be at odds with humanity.
Remember the big snow storm in Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer?
Westerns are another good example of setting because so many of them use the frontier, or the American West as a setting. By combining location, time period, and familiar elements related to time and location, the world becomes more and more developed.
This leads us to genre. The genre of the story answers the question: “What type of story is it?” Genres are also a good indicator of what will happen in the story. If it is a romance, people will probably fall in love during the story. If it is a comedy, it should have humorous moments, while dramas are often more serious. Action movies will probably rely a lot on big set pieces and fight scenes. All of these elements can be mixed and matched together in different ways. You can have a comedic fantasy like The Princess Bride, or you can have more dramatic fantasy stories like The Lord of the Rings. You can set a fantasy in space and call it Star Wars, or you can keep your space stories more focused on science and morality than myth and create Star Trek.
Genre conventions exist because a lot of stories share similar elements, but don’t let them stop you from trying something new in your writing. Blake Snyder, a screenwriter, thought about genre differently than we typically discuss it. In his book, Save the Cat!, he talks about genre not in terms of whether or not there are wizards, cowboys, or spaceships, but by the events that will happen throughout the arc of the story. If your story features a quest or road trip adventure, he calls it a “Golden Fleece” story, hearkening to Jason and the Argonauts. These stories also usually require characters to change internally, even if they are supposed to be looking for an external solution to a problem. If a story involves the relationship between two people working together, or two people falling in love, he calls it a “Buddy Love” story. This perspective is helpful to me because instead of focusing on stories with a similar setting, I look for stories with similar plot elements as guides if I get stuck while writing.
For example, if I am looking to write a fantasy-adventure story for a younger audience, there is a wide selection of material that I can use to work on world-building. However, just because two works are fantasy, they may not have what I need to tell my story. While The Hobbit and the Game of Thrones series may both be fantasy stories featuring kings, magic, and dragons, one is more of a political drama, while the other is a fairy story written for children. (HINT: Game of Thrones is not for children.) They’re both good places to mine for ideas, but if I was trying to write a story in the tone of The Hobbit, I probably wouldn’t want to use Game of Thrones as my guide.
Next week we will look at what “strong characters” are before we delve into story structure, and into the parts of a story.
When people talk about television and films today, usually they talk about how something looks, and how good the story was. In the age of the $200M+ blockbuster often times films may look really good, and use CGI, or other technical tricks to make a film really stand out, but without a good story, the whole thing can seem very pointless. Whether you love him or despise his name, George Lucas spoke the truth when he said, “A special effect without a story is a pretty boring thing.”
So, if story is so important, how do you craft a story?
The truth of the matter is that there is a variety of different ways to tell a story. Some writers like to construct every bit of their story before they write it out fully, while others prefer to jump in and see where they end up at the end of their first draft.
My goal with these posts is just as much to help me in my writing as much as it is to try and explain the basic elements of creating a story. I will use terms from different sources, and try to get to what is important about each step of the process. While I will do my best to share what I have learned, I will also point to other sources that may be of help to a writer.
A final disclaimer about my advice is that there are always exceptions to the rule, but I will try to share things that are found in the vast majority of stories.
For our first week, we should talk about the three main parts of a story: the protagonist, the antagonist, and the conflict.
The protagonist is the main character. They are the character that the audience follows, and the character the story is about. They’re pretty easy to pick out, and their name sometimes appears in the title of the story like: Harry Potter, Spider-Man, Batman, etc. Now, protagonists don’t all have to be heroes, or morally good, but their actions shape the story.
Opposing the protagonist is the antagonist. Usually they want the opposite of whatever the protagonist wants. In the Hunger Games series, President Snow wants things to stay as they are, while Katniss Everdeen and her allies seek revolution. In The Princess Bride, Buttercup wants to marry Westley, and Prince Humperdinck wants her all to himself. In Return of the Jedi, Luke Skywalker and the rebels want freedom, but the Emperor wants order and control. It’s important to have opposing forces in a story, otherwise the story would be over before it even started. Characters just achieving their goals without trial is boring. Struggle is interesting!
The struggles of a character come in the form of conflict. Conflict is the driving force of the story. In Star Wars the Empire wants to build the Death Star, so that it can enforce the law. The rebels think this is a terrible idea, so they plan to blow it up. Conflict is related to what the story is about. If you want to write about a runner winning the big race, they probably had struggles. They probably ran against people that were much better at running than them, or maybe the runner fell and got hurt, and had to practice harder for the big race. The point is that there must be obstacles that the character has to overcome. They don’t have to be huge like destroying Death Stars, either. In A Charlie Brown Thanksgiving, the conflict is that Charlie Brown has to make Thanksgiving dinner for his friends, but he also has to eat dinner at his grandmother’s house. He can’t disappoint his grandmother, but he also can’t cook!
(Luckily, Snoopy is there to help.)
Next week we will discuss setting, and some of the different types of stories.